Topic: In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
My essay:
In recent years, there is an increasing number of industries and businesses being recommended to relocate in regional areas by governments. Despite some obvious drawbacks, I think that the benefits are more even more significant.
On the other hand, industries and businesses may face some challenges during early stages of transitions. In other words, in larger cities, there are more workers having greater availability of skills than another areas. Moreover, when companies are moved to regional areas like rural areas, they may cause air and water pollution in villages. However, governments can deal with this problems by a great waste management. Nevertheless, this is also a small piece for the development.
On the flip sides, I still believe that there are more advantages of this trends. This means that if industries are built in rural areas, we can boost these places develop the infrastructures. It also has many different positive impact on equal economic growth of all areas. Besides, it is extremely convenient for bosses to invest in regional areas since there is more space to build industries and businesses and costs of building or renting in there are much cheaper than in the big cities.
In addition to this, constant immigration toward to larger cites contribute to traffic congestion and pollution in there. Therefore, relocation companies in regional areas not only can tackle these problems, but also create more opportunities occupation for people in small village. As a result, their living standard can be enhanced.
To sum up, it is extremely obvious that industries and businesses should relocate in regional areas although there are some drawbacks. However, as long as companies are ready to adapt, I believe that they can get more great changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, i think, in addition, as a result, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26480836237 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8613294728 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4241187288 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218362230219 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674507951174 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553115143648 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125063386594 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346232095778 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.