Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hobbies play a vital role in a modern life. Naturally, hobbies have a powerful influence on the way we live and their effects are often positive. It seems hobbies provide people with a suitable source by which they can feel relaxed. The present essay aims to discuss that hobbies are effective for at least three main reasons.
First and foremost, hobbies can be very helpful to those people who care about their mind health. For one thing, people are busy bee these days. Actually, they spend most of times at workplace so that hobbies help people to recharge their batteries. For instance, people can do different activities without paying lots of money at their weekends or on holidays. In fact, they do not need to spend lots of money to have hobbies. Another thing is that hobbies help people to focus on their works or studies better than without them. As an illustration, painting and drawing are kinds of hobbies which people from all walks of life can do them without paying lots of money.
Second, it is generally admitted that hobbies can expand people's horizons. In the first place, people can increase their knowledge and improve their useful skills by doing hobbies. An example may help clarify the point. Children who did gardening during their childhood have more information about plants,flowers and so on. In the second place, technology helps people to access to information from around the world. In fact, people can surf the net during free times and get new information. All in all, hobbies effect much more than we think they do.
The last but not least ,hobbies improve our relationships. Doctor smith the head of psychology department asserts that hobbies can cause people to strength their relationships between families and friends. In Denmark, family play card games at weekends as hobbies and they talk about themselves during playing. In addition, spending time with people who have close relationships and doing some leisure activities help people to love each other more. The latest figures released by Food and Drug Administration (F.D.A) reflect that about 78 percent of people who have group activities as hobbies with their family are able to control difficult situations better than others. In other words, many experts strongly believe that hobbies can increase people's abilities and their critical thinking in personal and family relationships.
To sum up,it can be stated that hobbies is so beneficial for at least three main reasons. However, the question is that can hobbies really improve the health and happiness of the new generations in general? Only time will tell but in the meantime hobbies continue to influence every aspect of every day lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, another thing, at least, for instance, in addition, in fact, in general, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04708520179 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51659116915 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2420634692 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3703703704 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5185185185 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92592592593 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212539593913 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640439446544 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333856426239 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124475545959 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337091380698 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.