Write a paragraph of about 150 words about ONE of the demerits of street food
Eating street food poses significant health risks in different ways. Firstly, to make a profit from low-cost street food, vendors use the ingredients that are of poor quality. For example, the street vendors use artificial preservatives to keep the remaining food fresh for selling in the next few days. And, they usually fry food in oil which is reused over a period of time. When consuming a large quantity of these preservatives and substances created from the process of heating oil repeatedly, people get a high risk of cancer and other chronic diseases. Secondly, street food is directly affected by environmental conditions. Because selling and buying street food virtually takes place outdoors on carts or trucks, dirt and smoke from vehicles or insects, especially flies, easily cover food with harmful bacteria. Moreover, food that is not kept at an appropriate temperature can be tainted and causes abdominal pain, diarrhea, and worse, digestive disorders for eaters. In conclusion, street food is harmful to people’s health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Accelerates
...e foods many times. Accordingly, this ? accelerates the rate of nutrient evaporation dramat...
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Line 1, column 1006, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow these substances could be converted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, but, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 156.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87981645711 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724358974359 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2905219647 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118983307867 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456584149872 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477095702457 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118983307867 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.