The graph below gives information from a 2008 thousand report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The line graph compares the figures of the energy consumption by several different kinds of fuel from 1980 to 2008 in a America,and it also predicts the number from 2009 to 2030.
Overall, from 1980 to 2008,the number of petrol and oil's consumption is leading the first position(during 35 quadrillion units and 40) although it decreases in the year of 1985 and 1995. By contrast, people in the USA use the new kinds of resources least,which are nuclear,solar or wind energy and hydropower,and the number of those are all under 10 quadrillion unions ethier in the past or now.
In 1980, the consumption of coal(about 16 units) is less than natural gas (20 units),but in the year of 1991, the data of coal consumption outrages the other.And then the later went up.However ,in the year of 2008,the amount of coal using went beyond the gas consumption again.It is predicted that in the following over 20 years, the trend will not change.The data of coal will be more than 30 units in 2030.
In 1984, the data of those three new kinds energy'consumption are at the same point,which are the least at the same time.And in the future, the figure of those will still at the end of the graph.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...he figures of the energy consumption by several different kinds of fuel from 1980 to 2008 in a Am...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rent kinds of fuel from 1980 to 2008 in a America,and it also predicts the number...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...s of fuel from 1980 to 2008 in a America,and it also predicts the number from 2009 t...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...USA use the new kinds of resources least,which are nuclear,solar or wind energy and hy...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , solar
...nds of resources least,which are nuclear,solar or wind energy and hydropower,and the n...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...lear,solar or wind energy and hydropower,and the number of those are all under 10 qu...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... units is less than natural gas 20 units,but in the year of 1991, the data of coal c...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... of coal consumption outrages the other.And then the later went up.However ,in the ...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...es the other.And then the later went up.However ,in the year of 2008,the amount of coal...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...other.And then the later went up.However ,in the year of 2008,the amount of coal u...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...g went beyond the gas consumption again.It is predicted that in the following over...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ver 20 years, the trend will not change.The data of coal will be more than 30 units...
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... energyconsumption are at the same point,which are the least at the same time.And in t...
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Line 6, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...nt,which are the least at the same time.And in the future, the figure of those will...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66028708134 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82978658764 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535885167464 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8034964323 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.8 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8 22.9334400587 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179054953816 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104543823721 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079449628644 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117715185383 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834645129867 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.7 10.3012195122 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...he figures of the energy consumption by several different kinds of fuel from 1980 to 2008 in a Am...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rent kinds of fuel from 1980 to 2008 in a America,and it also predicts the number...
^
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...s of fuel from 1980 to 2008 in a America,and it also predicts the number from 2009 t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...USA use the new kinds of resources least,which are nuclear,solar or wind energy and hy...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , solar
...nds of resources least,which are nuclear,solar or wind energy and hydropower,and the n...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...lear,solar or wind energy and hydropower,and the number of those are all under 10 qu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... units is less than natural gas 20 units,but in the year of 1991, the data of coal c...
^^^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... of coal consumption outrages the other.And then the later went up.However ,in the ...
^^^
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...es the other.And then the later went up.However ,in the year of 2008,the amount of coal...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...other.And then the later went up.However ,in the year of 2008,the amount of coal u...
^^
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...g went beyond the gas consumption again.It is predicted that in the following over...
^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ver 20 years, the trend will not change.The data of coal will be more than 30 units...
^^^
Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... energyconsumption are at the same point,which are the least at the same time.And in t...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...nt,which are the least at the same time.And in the future, the figure of those will...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66028708134 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82978658764 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535885167464 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8034964323 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.8 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8 22.9334400587 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179054953816 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104543823721 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079449628644 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117715185383 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834645129867 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.7 10.3012195122 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.