Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizen more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Economic growth is indeed a factor of depicting a country’s prosperity. However, experts believe the additional wealth does not indicate the surge in citizens’ satisfaction. In my opinion, I completely agree with the given statement.
Despite the fact that the increase in economic wealth boosts a nation’s status on international scale, however, it might yet to execute the domestic issues which is rooted from the phenomenon, namely income inequality. Gross domestic product per capita rate illustrates income of a person. However, it does not demonstrate a person’s output in specific numbers, therefore the gap between the rich and the poor is often being neglected. While prosperous people continue to make more money, the poor people are struggling to make a living. No proper social status, poorer health and escalating crime rates are inevitable consequences of income inequality. Moreover, people in poverty have reduced senses of fairness as they are not the figures that are being taken care of yet are the ones who are being despise by the society. The judgmental mindsets of most people nowadays have created a far distance between the poor and the rest, which makes job opportunities inaccessible for poorer people.
In addition, the notion of increasing nation’s wealth is directly proportional to the overall well-being is an entire paradox. Well-being is evaluated on various aspects and undeniably money is not the only indicator. There are personal needs that surpass the influence of money and being wealthy is not a solution. For instance, domestic conflicts belong to the political status of a country and its government, and the need for security cannot be solved by money for the time being. On top of that, regarding factors such as mental health, money is also an inapplicable solution. It implies that the need for being highly empathized is what people who suffer from mental disorders are striving for. Therefore, there are needs of higher requirements and being prosperous is no longer the answer.
In conclusion, the sense of satisfactory consists of many factors. I strongly agree that economic growth is not the only crucial one and others should be taken into consideration as well.
- i 78
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies 84
- i 89
- Many people argue that exams are the best way to assess people s competence and that no better system has yet been found Others say they are unfair unhelpful and out of date Do you think the benefits of exams outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 13.1623246493 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28651685393 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89335114938 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564606741573 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2699376815 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0526315789 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139109738188 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420546733711 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577097492083 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100776600909 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077602602203 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.