Advancement in field of agribusiness appears to be salient which is being fostered by copious of nations in order to make this business maverick. However, a majority of dwellers has been gone through food crisis. This attempt would be talked over regarding both the vistas in the looming segment.
To commence with, the top tier motive beyond this storyline that is budget. To be precise, in suffering territories several farmers are below poverty line. Hence, it might not be a attainable task for every inhabitant to afford these classification of gadgets. Let's say, in India, average farmer income is nearly about 3 to 4 lacks, but a tractor cost them approximately 10 lacks. What's more, if someone has a ability to buy these machines, the training would have the trouble. Inshort, they don't know how to control or handle the super heavy machines.
Conversely, there are a bit of compounds too, and the initial one needs to be explanation. Preliminary, the goverment should be highered overseas experts who can make use of these machines in convenient and appropriate way and this step will definately encounter the trouble. Notwithstanding, by giving subsidies to masses officials could be advocated civilions and this must be the permanent infusion.
To recapitulate, this is the foremost concern in the immediate scenario, but the goverment ought not to be shunned these situations, because there are chances that this wee portions take a new look of messworsy circumstances.
- Topic Some people say patriotism is the biggest cause of war But others believe that people are patriotic they are more likely to take an interest in a country s day to day running and therefore less likely to allow unscrupulous politicians to drive a cou 11
- In spite of the advancements made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this case What can be done about this problem 56
- SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO SPEND THEIR LIFES DOING THE SAME THINGS AND AVOIDING CHANGE OTHERS HOWEVER THINK THAT CHANGE IS ALWAYS A GOOD THINK DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 89
- Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games why do they do this Is this positive or negative development 87
- Many people say smoking should be banned and some say it is not a good idea What is your opinion on this 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ow poverty line. Hence, it might not be a attainable task for every inhabitant to...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this classification' or 'these classifications'?
Suggestion: this classification; these classifications
...ble task for every inhabitant to afford these classification of gadgets. Lets say, in India, average...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...afford these classification of gadgets. Lets say, in India, average farmer income is...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...actor cost them approximately 10 lacks. Whats more, if someone has a ability to buy t...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ly 10 lacks. Whats more, if someone has a ability to buy these machines, the trai...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g would have the trouble. Inshort, they dont know how to control or handle the super...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bits'?
Suggestion: bits
...vy machines. Conversely, there are a bit of compounds too, and the initial one n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1867219917 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96905291618 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688796680498 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.524556089 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207925754112 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640790164328 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476400917238 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124406024633 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277491518877 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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