The table shows the social and economic indicators for four countries , namely Canada , Japan , Peru , and Zaire , in 1994 . First column shows about the annual income per person . We can clearly see that Canada has highest income with 11100 US dollars when compared with Japan , Peru and Zaire . This difference is because Canada is more developed than remaining 3 countries . Second row is about life expectancy at birth . The life expectancy of Canada is 76 , Japan has life expectancy of 78 , Peru and Zaire has 51 and 47 respectively . Here we see that Japan has more life expectancy than Canada .
Third column is about daily calorie supply per person . Canada has a daily calorie supply of 3326 per person while in the other hand Japan has 2846 , Peru and Zaire has 1927 and 1749 calorie per person . Which means the people in Canada has more calorie intake when compared with Japan , Peru and Zaire . Fourth and final row is about adult literacy rate indicated in percentage . Canada has literacy rate of 99 meanwhile Japan also has 99 percent literacy rate as well . Coming to Peru and Zaire has 68 and 34 percent literacy rate .
On the conclusion we can say that Zaire and Peru has very low annual income , life expectancy , daily calorie and literacy rate . Which shows that the peoples condition in these countries is not vey happy and healthy compared to Canada and Japan . In the terms of annual income Canada and Japan has far more income than Peru and Zaire . We can conclude that Peru and Zaire are in under developed condition and Canada , Japan are developed countries .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78966789668 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31889403953 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409594095941 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4760473986 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3529411765 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 1.69756097561 2003% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876344981509 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437400548745 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111234310094 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066630917273 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566299677421 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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