Write an essay about the social and economic impacts of social media
It is no doubt that social media has brought considerable changes to our lives in recent years. This essay therefore will discuss both the potential positive and negative impacts of social media on society and the economy.
In terms of the advantages, social networking sites have made it much easier for us to maintain contact with significant friends or family members as well as online friends regardless of geographical locations. In other words, it has eliminated many communication barriers enabling people to interact and freely share information, news, photos and opinions about various topics of interest. Besides, with the aid of social media, a large number of companies enhance in way of advertising campaigns to promote and develop their branch and products, particular is the use of the targeted advertising with a viewing to attracting potential customers. Today, the online platform provides marketplaces, where everyone who has an account can sell their products and buy several items. This directly supports the stability of domestic economic and social productivity.
Despite the above benefits, I personally contend that social media may result in many detrimental impacts on society and the economy that should not be overlooked. Firstly, social networking sites pose threats to privacy for both individuals and society. As more and more information gets placed online, there is an increased danger of hackers, companies in ways that undermine personal privacy. And in some cases, your data is outright stolen. Secondly, some young people use social networks that are not really civilized or utilise forums, associations and groups to publicly attack, smear and insult each other. And the overuse of social networking sites also affects our values and beliefs about relationships. In addition, social media affects productivity as it distracts staff from work.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the positive effects that social media has on our society and economy are outweighed by the disadvantages. Therefore, we need to take advantage of social media wisely and properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cial media on society and the economy. In terms of the advantages, social netwo...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... Besides, with the aid of social media, a large number of companies enhance in way of advertising...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45426829268 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8643467107 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8060391011 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408247809446 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122183531493 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725589331924 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245880542975 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444970198239 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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