IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Some People Believe That The Only Purpose Of Films Is To Entertain. Others Say Films Should Have Educational Value. Discuss Both Views And Give Your Opinion.
To the majority of viewers, it appears that films are simply a mean of entertainment. Meanwhile, some people contend that films also convey meaningful lessons and messages which are valuable. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the idea that films can serve educational purposes, and I will give detailed evidence for it in this essay.
On the one hand, there are some reasons making people think that films are only for entertainment and relaxation. Firstly, these days, entertaining series can appeal to a remarkably wide range of audience. For example, the Avengers film series, has made a profit of billions of dollars, thanks to their magnificent visual effects and the intriguing sci-fi narratives. As viewers are mainly attracted to entertaining films, especially the ones about superheroes, other genres might be overlooked. Secondly, people often watch films in their limited amounts of leisure time; thus, they tend to prefer the dramas with straightforward plots. As a result, they would be reluctant to be mindful of the small details, which contain implicit meanings.
On the other hand, people with an artistic character may find some notable philosophy in the cinematography industry. It is often that directors share their notions about the life and other subjects through their works. Since the most well-known and successful directors are the sophisticated people with substantial experiences of life, their perspectives could be interesting to see. For instance, Parasite, a Korean film, has recently become a global phenomenon and won the prestigious Oscar award after giving people an unprecedented view on the society.
All in all, due to the rapid growth of the entertainment industry, a large percentage of viewers have been misled that all types of films are for pleasure. Nevertheless, there are many moral values hidden in films that are beneficial for people to learn from.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Oscar) must be used with a third-person verb: 'awards'.
Suggestion: awards
...henomenon and won the prestigious Oscar award after giving people an unprecedented vi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31125827815 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9388681066 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6204433145 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.933333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268326915108 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855446124198 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055173135738 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15883714531 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283731713721 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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