Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In the age and day, there is an increasing number of old workers encouraged to continue working at any age. Despite some oblivious drawbacks, I think lots of benefits will be achieved.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of this trend. The first reason is that old people find it difficult to get used to coping with the change in technology. In the other word, it takes more time for them to keep up with new software and skills than young people. In addition, there is no sense of competition in older workers. This means that the absence of spirit and competition can lead to lower productivities in employers.
On the flip sides, I still believe that old generation can see to different works in their companies. First and foremost, they are more skilled and experienced than the young which can help them to have better communication skills both in oral and written. For this reason they can be excellent as trainers, mentors or coaches. What is more, they can be cost effective in some sides because they are usually satisfied with their occupations. As a result, they show up to work and do not jump job like young workers which can help company save money.
Another reason is that old people have a great ethic. For example, they are apt to come earlier, willing to stay late if they are on the go. Furthermore, they are experienced to know what to focus on or ignore so they can provide a calming influence for the young.
All in all, there is no doubt that letting old employees work over legal age has some disadvantages. However, in my opinion, there are more even significant benefits of this trend.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60860643417 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7078430595 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283838616637 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892874819462 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065887529518 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154250268617 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229846024378 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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