New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's digital age, new technologies have revolutionized the way children spend their leisure time. From my perspective, while the benefits are undeniable, they are overshadowed by more glaring drawbacks.
It is undeniable that the proliferation of digitally inclined leisure activities yields a multitude of beneficial outcomes. First and foremost, one cannot disregard the valuable chances in accessing with a plethora of educational opportunities. With the help of interactive learning apps and online resources, children can now access a wealth of knowledge at their fingertips. This not only enhances their academic performance but also fosters a love for learning. Moreover, these technologies offer personalized learning experiences, catering to each child's unique needs and learning pace. Foremost among the advantages is opening up a world of creativity and self-expression for children. Through platforms such as social media, blogs, and video-sharing websites children can showcase their talents and connect with like-minded individuals from around the globe. This not only boosts their self-confidence but also encourages them to explore their passions and develop new skills. Additionally, the digital realm provides a platform for children to voice their opinions and contribute to important discussions, thereby nurturing their critical thinking abilities.
On the flip side, the positive aspects are eclipsed by more overwhelming advantages. One major concern is the sedentary lifestyle that often accompanies prolonged screen time. Excessive screen time not only diminished opportunities for physical activity but also hampers the development of crucial interpersonal skills. With much of their time spent interacting with screens rather than engaging in face-to-face communication, young individuals may struggle to empathize and communicate effectively in real-life situations. Additionally, the unrestricted access to the internet is one of the pernicious reasons that young generation are being increasingly threatened by the risks of dangerous diseases such as obesity, heart disease due to their sedentary lifestyle. Another striking concern is that the constant exposure to digital devices in enjoying free time of children associated with attention deficits and decreased academic performance. Therefore, it is essential for parents to establish clear boundaries and monitor their children's online activities to ensure their safety.
In conclusion, while it is crucial to acknowledge the existence of advantages, the evidence overwhelming supports the assertation that the disadvantages of the advanced technologies affect in child’s way using their leisure time are more pronounced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to pace'
Suggestion: to pace
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...advantages of the advanced technologies affect in child’s way using their leisure time ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06753246753 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28765303922 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605194805195 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8499880209 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.947368421 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259536126099 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730941224524 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804835671867 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166770451535 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468831268646 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.93 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.