Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
With the development of economic and society, metropolis in many countries are facing a lot of problems include traffic and accommodation so some businesses are stimulated to move their company to underprivileged areas. Personally, I strongly believe that the drawbacks of this solution are more significant than the benefits.
To begin with, relocation of some businesses have more advantages for both businesses and society. First of all, when businesses move their company to non-urban areas, they can attract many young labors with the lower salary. As a result, they may save their labour costs and increase their revenue. Some underdeveloped areas will receive more resources and opportunities to develop their economic and enhance transport system. Secondly, when businesses implement this plan on a large scale, it will help to reduce the overpopulation in big cities that is a leading cause of traffic jam and lack of accommodation for citizens. Therefore, these cities have more blank spaces to build house, apartment or public projects and develop transport system.
On the other hand, I agree with doing business in the countryside is disadvantage for many firms. In some underprivileged areas, there are not enough conditions like electricity or convenient transport system for business activities. Secondly, consumer demands in rural areas is usually lower than that of in metros so it may be decrease the revenue of the company. Moreover, experts or skilled workers usually live in metros so it is hard for them to move a countryside to work every day. As a result, business have to allocate their budget for additional costs like the accommodation expenses for their employees.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that moving business from big cities to rural areas has more notable problems than benefits and the government should have more policy to stimulate business implements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3779264214 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99286818719 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8309731374 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274705470384 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884220322346 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744623790299 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183336341183 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693852699619 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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