There is no need for printed books, magazines, and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, thanks to the advancement of technology, there is an increase in reading on the internet and some people argue that traditional books are not necessary. Personally, I do not totally agree with this idea.
To begin with, printed books would be considered as one of the diversity of information sources that allows individuals easy access to general knowledge regardless of geographical distance. Thanks to printed books, learners from remote areas who struggle with limited internet connection can have more valuable opportunities to broaden their horizons and obtain information and knowledge as well.] As a result, printed books are still maintained as the best option for people in underprivileged areas where computers maximize their benefits.
Secondly, in modern technology, electricity books could face more difficulties to access old customers who are used to using printed materials. [To be more specific, most elderly people who are behind the times would prefer to use newspapers to acquire news because of their conservation and unwillingness to change.] Furthermore, their belief in traditional books or newspapers would bring them reliable information rather than modern ones due to unverified information.This is the reason why some newspaper brands still maintain customer retention, especially old customers. For example, Tien Phong newspapers holds a special place in Vietnamese’s heart as the best quality newspaper brands in Vietnam with the newest and exact information and the proof is this brand is rewarded as the best reputation newspaper in Vietnam in many times.
However, to state the obvious, electric books are dominated in modern life thanks to their convenience. This kind of book allows people to gain information faster by only clicking a mouse anytime, anywhere without any distractions. Moreover, people who are living in the informative age, the fast in accessing and connecting information also become their merits that can help them to boost their working performance.
In conclusion, I believe books and newspapers have to be kept to cater for some people’s needs, especially for the elderly and the people from remote areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54599406528 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05355232065 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566765578635 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.359440477 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.909090909 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6363636364 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169656017452 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070144552346 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373997766998 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100515233303 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346822044398 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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