Some people believe that competition as children to be better prepared for their future while others say that competition can be harmful for children and should be invited to adults. discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is well acknowledge that "today's children are leaders of tomorrow". Presently, some proportion of masses assert that competitiveness assist the children to be prepared for their career. While others opine that competition should be limited to mature people by keeping into consideration its jeopardy effects on juveniles. Here, I would like to throw light on both the sides with my perspective.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to support the former view. First and foremost, the role of competition is terrific to nourish the children with numerous quality traits in their early age. To demonstrate, children, having sense of competitiveness, are expected to learn superior attributes such as never giving up spirit, good planner,hard work and goal oriented approach etctera in their early age which will help in their future. Moreover, adolescents come to know about their weak areas which can be improved before facing real life problems after school life. Therefore, such competitions contribute remarkably in the overall development of children which set's the foundation of successful career in their life.
Numerous points can be considered to support the latter view. Initially, competition act as a stumbling block in the psychological growth of adolescence.
To elucidate, children may come under the pressure of how to outdo others in competitions and they become anxious. consequently, competition could decline the health standard of children. Besides this, pupils may follow the path of suicide if they would not attaim their standard target in the competition due to their impulsiveness. Thence, competitions have adverse effects on offsprings and it should be limited to adults.
To recapitulate, undeniably, the sense of competition may make the children self-centred. But according to my point of view, competition installs stupendous characteristics among Juveniles which helps them to reach at the zenith of success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59060402685 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21285899973 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9056869046 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404500842744 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124880697016 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760948004853 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212195527721 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774845644142 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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