Today's people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this world of a commercialization, the trend of advertising is spreading its roots in every nook and corner of the world. I strongly believe that advertisements have jeopardy impacts on consumers as it seduce them to buy the products unnecessarily. I substantiate my view points in the subsequent paragraphs.
A bunch of points can be mentioned to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, folks are expected to become extravagant on account of commercials. To elucidate, producers use eye catching designs and graphics as a part of their cunning strategies which allure people to buy new products even if they do not need it. According to a recent survey, advertisements influence 90% of consumer to purchase goods. Moreover, the role of advertisements is terrific to increase the cost of product as entrepreneurs have to invest profuse amount of money on commercials. Therefore, these charges are added in the cost of product which accelerate the price of goods. Needless to say, advertisements have adverse effect on the pocket of consumers.
Probing ahead, consumers sometimes mislead through advertisements as producers add spice in the real content by exaggerating the products in adverts. Besides this, increment in trash is a major problem created by advertisement. To make it clear, people are under the influence of a buy more and more so that they throw away old things at the landfill sites which emerged toxic gases. It is apparently seen, that advertisement are responsible for materialistic attitude of civilians and it negatively affects both people and ambience.
To recapitulate, undeniably, according to producers point of view, advertisements are blatant and conspicuous medium which reflect their product to the whole world. However, I still believe that manufactures use commercials to grind their own access without considering their detrimental effects on consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39932885906 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3320593109 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1264204274 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136950559954 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403148820584 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047821557049 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798663357719 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507959127861 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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