The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is reasonable to think that payment is the most considerable aspect for deciding a job. However, personally, I believe that beside salary, individuals should cogitate other areas which are equally important when choosing a career.
On the one hand, it is a fact that high income is a worthy consideration. Firstly, money is a necessity for human’s basic needs like food, education, health care and treatment. In this modernised era, every country is spending lots of effort on technology and high-equipped industries; therefore, social services are becoming more and more expensive. That is, people have to work hard and earn more money in order to gain a full life. Secondly, people need money for taking care of their families. For instance, if a married adult works for passion but the job is not paid well, he will not be able to afford the family's bills consequently. Moreover, in order to have a comfortable lifelive, it is not just paying for the needy but other types of amusement in life.
On the other hand, other considerations are also as significant as payment. In the first place, for a healthy work-life balance and mental peace, personal relationships with office coworkers and a conducive industrial surroundings are necessary. For example, employees' unpleasant verbal arguments, politics, and envy of one another, are all typical yet harmful reasons to damage the task area's prosperity atmosphere. Next, the management has a considerable impact on the task's accomplishment. Employees are motivated to work hard and be satisfied with their work when they are appreciated. Job happiness, for example, is linked to personal qualities, skills learned, and the position attained, rather than the amount of money earned.
To summarize, there are a variety of aspects and qualities that are equally as important as your income. Money is necessary to live a full life; similarly, a pleasant workplace allows you to focus on your work and maintain a healthy mental and physical health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...ilies. For instance, if a married adult works for passion but the job is not paid wel...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... but other types of amusement in life. On the other hand, other considerations ...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'surrounding'?
Suggestion: surrounding
...ce coworkers and a conducive industrial surroundings are necessary. For example, employees u...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tasks'' or 'task's'?
Suggestion: tasks'; task's
...gement has a considerable impact on the tasks accomplishment. Employees are motivated...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...riety of aspects and qualities that are equally as important as your income. Money is nece...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17538461538 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97487068985 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593846153846 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9548494741 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9411764706 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4705882353 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137704231123 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439774796183 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042628409502 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936766392712 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661008370402 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.