Some think that residents should responsible for keeping thier areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
These days maitaining the hygiene plays an important role in development of the society.Previously this issue was not really recognised compared to current situation.some of the people feel that keeping the areas clean and tidy is the duty of the residents who live thier.In this essay we will discuss briefly about both the views nd also share my opinion.
Firstly, i would like to discuss how the citizens of the society need to feel responsible in keeping thier areas clean like in many way such as collecting the wastage in proper manner and dumping them to the proper bins.And people should not think that keeping the area clean is achieved by the wastage disposal,there should be equal share of right to conduct some campaigns which relates the study of importance of keeping clean and tidy.In simple manner people should not threw the waste disposals on the roads,should not disobey the rules drawn by the government for the hygenicity of the society.
Secondly, one the other hand it is also the duty of the governmment to lookafter , inspect the departments which re responsible for the cleanliness .And if necesary government should also need to take stric action towards this aspect.There should be made some amendmends in the rules which people are neglecting to follow. Hense,this encourage the people to follow and leads to the hygenicity.
In conclusion i would like to share my opinion, that each and every resident of the society should feel responsible for the maintaing and keeping the areas clean and tidy,as this neglected may also impact on the health of the residents too.And alsothe government should provide necessary requirements for people who ae paid for the work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10357142857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80438336388 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.954755812 49.4020404114 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.8 106.682146367 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 20.7667163134 270% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6 7.06120827912 278% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349652204607 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166730659012 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956373715372 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204313898702 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577980743186 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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