Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
There is no denying that the beneficial purpose of sports is an extremely hot consideration in society. While there is a school of thought that the significance of sports has a wide impact on both individuals and society, I hold an opinion that the main goal when people participate in sports is recreation.
On the one hand, many supportive arguments about the crucial role of sports might come from the significant benefits, when it comes to individual and national aspects. In terms of individual gain from sport activities, people who are involved in a kind of sport and participate in it regularly tend to be healthier and more energetic than the others who do less. They not only possess a strong physical body and optimic attitude, but also are able to widen their social cycles through attending sport-clubs or sharing with others' interests. Besides, sports are revellant with many significant national ceremonies which are regarded as a reminder of historical and traditional values. For example, a Marathon competition is held annually in order to commemorate a historical event in European countries.
However, I personally suppose that the sport role is more likely to create excitement in the community. Without any doubt, the primary goal of sports enhances physical development and supports people to de-stress after their daily hard schooling or working. Moreover, people, without sport talent or love, are capable of choosing another type of leisure activities such as home-cooking and listening to music, which brings the same recreational benefits as sports do. By all accounts, sports cannot lead to any physical material and value more than spiritual excitement of individuals and small groups. Humans can change the world thanks to acknowledgement of science-technology instead of knowledge of sports, unless they just secure a way to win a sports game.
In conclusion, sports obviously play a crucial role in human life. Many people argue that the value of sports is considered a recreational activity, including me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27914110429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01980895321 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0488661305 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.928571429 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185399255915 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643881072976 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333229954476 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117299582305 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00774538029036 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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