Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?
In the hectic pace of modern life, the young have faced a wide range of stressors from their family, peers, and advertisements. In this essay, I will discuss both some precursors to the issue and several viable solutions.
It should be worth noticing that there are various roots to this negative situation. One of them stems from their parents' over-expectations, accompanied by their comparisons with their friends’ academic performances. Due to the competitiveness of the job market and organizations’ demands for qualified and well-educated workforces, parents are likely to think that their children must be successful in school. Thus, those young generations are obligated to spend many hours industriously studying or taking extra classes instead of enjoying their lives. Another reason is that unethical commercial campaigns directly target young children. Those junior citizens are overwhelmed by tons of advertisements from fast-food stores, toy companies, and cornflakes, which makes them lose their innocent and carefree childhood.
However, I think that people are able to take some drastic remedies to keep those negative sources inaccessible to children. Firstly, parents should manage to generate a mentally and physically healthy domestic environment for their sons and daughters with a balance between learning and relaxing. For example, affordable cooling-down activities such as traveling and drawing are incentives for the young to release their pressures. Secondly, it is true that moral business should be emphasized and practiced by all employees and managers. Furthermore, government leaders need to enact a strict law on child protection in order to help children not become victims of advertising.
In conclusion, I believe that reasons such as academic, social, and commercial burdens make young generations more stressful, but there are a number of actions that address the issue when it comes to responsibility and cooperation between parents and external factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71237458194 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17698643448 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642140468227 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7280241128 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0945180579513 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329741669399 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226995624901 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545846746146 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013699304319 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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