You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays.
You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter,
-- introduce yourself
-- explain what experience and special skills you have
-- explain why you are interested in the job
Dear sir/ Madam
My name is XXX, I have seen your recruit advertisement on Today’s newspaper. I am writing to apply for the position of mail deliver .
I am a student from Viet Nam. I have been studying journalism major at Cambridge University since September. I will have a long winter holiday this year but because of the pandemic, I cannot go back to Viet Nam. So, I am looking for a part-time job during the holiday to build up more experiences to my abroad life .
I used to be a shipper in Viet Nam, I can ride motorbike, I can drive car, I can remember the roads quickly . Thus, I believe that I will be a good mailman. I am pretty new to the city so I think taking this job is a great opportunity to know more a bout it.
I really appreciate if you can give me this chance. I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully, XXX
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o apply for the position of mail deliver . I am a student from Viet Nam. I have ...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...liver . I am a student from Viet Nam. I have been studying journalism major at ...
^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t Cambridge University since September. I will have a long winter holiday this ye...
^
Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ld up more experiences to my abroad life . I used to be a shipper in Viet Nam, I...
^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ve car, I can remember the roads quickly . Thus, I believe that I will be a good m...
^^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reciate if you can give me this chance. I look forward to your reply. Yours fai...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23602484472 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63781361703 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658385093168 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9073093333 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.8333333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184004695878 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626718638924 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500093082342 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106023374264 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514138748015 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.