Traveling abroad is the only way for people to learn foreign cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?
These days, being knowledgeable about many cultures in the world is not a strange idea to people, especially the young ones. Travelling abroad is an interesting way to learn foreign cultures. However, in my opinion, there are some other ways for people to do so and those are the reasons why it is not the only way.
The first one is attending a course studying about one particular language or culture at their local universities, schools or centers. In each city or province, there must be at least one place which can meet the demand of learning foreign languages or cultures.
Next, learning at home by themselves with smartphones, laptops or tablets. There are plenty of applications which can help them to learn anytime and anywhere, all of them are quite easy for the new users to experience. Those smart devices were designed for finding information, among many beneficial functions, and nearly everything is free so people can consider using them to get more knowledge.
One more simple way is making friends with the foreigners. Just find them on the streets, at the workplaces or maybe on the Internet, and try to be friends with them. Learning foreign cultures may not be too hard if people do it in a practical way - talking. The diversity inside of each culture given by native friends is even more accurate and interesting than just searching them always.
With these useful, simple ways, I believe that traveling abroad is not the only way to learn foreign cultures.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-28 | tranluuhoangphuc | 81 | view |
| 2021-08-07 | tamle | 84 | view |
| 2021-05-09 | vishalpreet | 72 | view |
| 2014-07-08 | dhruv546 | 85 | view |
- this is for testing the web
- Traveling abroad is the only way for people to learn foreign cultures To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion 81
- It is true that in some countries grandparents play a significant role in bringing up children This trend has both positive and negative sides Let s look at the positive side first 84
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he reasons why it is not the only way. The first one is attending a course stud...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earning foreign languages or cultures. Next, learning at home by themselves wit...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ider using them to get more knowledge. One more simple way is making friends wi...
^^^
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a practical way" with adverb for "practical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...res may not be too hard if people do it in a practical way - talking. The diversity inside of each...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 384, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...nd interesting than just searching them always. With these useful, simple ways, I ...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sting than just searching them always. With these useful, simple ways, I believ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, at least, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6775734983 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3327741467 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6153846154 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281129280407 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110304155654 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106793248095 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173222778928 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104867507684 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.