Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowaday's, fast food construction has gained lot of popularity. Many people fear its negative effect. As consumption of junk food give many diseases such as body fat and damaged teeth. Rapper and plastic bag are also bad for nature and dehydrated food is cause of weak family bonding. I am completely agree with this statement and i will discussed my views in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, the first and foremost negative effect on environment is pollution. To make it more clear, rapper and plastic bags of junk food are responsable for environment because when individuals through the plastic things in the roads, rivers and oceans and they pollute the river water that is harmful for animals and nature. A survey was conducted in 2018 and authority obtain that 70% masses down the poly bags in the river. As a result, it has give a bad effect on the environs.
However, the frozen food increase the risk of infection not mere problems to related to the physical body but also mental health. In other words, if a children make habbit to eat junk food so, they become suffer from many illness such as body fat and depression because this food has more oily. Moreover, mostly people prefer to eat processed food in resturants they are saving time rather than preparing the ingrediants at home. In addition, in this modern era masses bonding with family very weak. If they prepare healthy food together so, that moment is memorable for families and these moment can avoid disorder like depression
In conclusion, currently, we are living in a contemporary world where frozen food is a great idea to save time but this junk food can affect the folks health such as body fat. Governments should invest in education to motivate mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many illnesses'.
Suggestion: many illnesses
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Message: Did you mean 'this moment' or 'these moments'?
Suggestion: this moment; these moments
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'folks'' or 'folk's'?
Suggestion: folks'; folk's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87583892617 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53627570923 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9595321622 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192251861285 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677663726533 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047152738062 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113307653234 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528981611115 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.