The graph below shows the percentage of part time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrate the percentage of part-time workers in four countries in 1980 and 2010.
Overall, the most percentage of part-time workers was both years in Wales, while in Scotland experienced a difference between 1980 and 2010 around 10%.
Initially, the most percentage of part-time workers underwent in Wales, while a change just around one in twenty in both years. Following, Wales in 1980 and England in 2010 stood at same percentage. Besides, Scotland stood around once in ten, being the weakest than other countries. Just under Northern Ireland.
In 2010, Scotland increased dramatically at a fifth, being the most increase than other countries. And the second increase experienced in England at less than a third, just under Scotland. On the other hand, Wales increased slowly at more than a third from 1980 to 2010. In contrast, Northern Ireland decline from 1980 to 2010 at less than a fifth, and there was a difference around one in twenty, being the weakest growth than other countries

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: illustrates
The graph illustrate the percentage of part-time workers in ...
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Suggestion:
...ers in four countries in 1980 and 2010. Overall, the most percentage of part-tim...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rence between 1980 and 2010 around 10%. Initially, the most percentage of part-t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, third, while, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10303030303 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64720168625 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2796384912 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172497731787 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903910470289 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109028208104 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177469320114 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12177273163 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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