some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary other think that the job itself is the most important aspect of a job include specific details and examples to support your choice.
It is believed by few individuals that job is most attractive aspect of their striped and whereas other argue that nearly job is a predominant aspect of a job. This essay will articulate the both sides along with my perspective.
On the first side, people prefer to salary as a vital aspect of job. "Because" throw the good salary they fulfill their desires and demands. They do not copy with difficult situations. Apart from that, they live their life without any worry as well as threating situations. To epitome, the numbers of nurses of the worldwide receive good amount of salary as compared to other occupations. As a result, they can leave their life with enjoy as well as happiness.
Why individual think job is a most important aspect of a job? there are so many reasons behind the situation because if people have good job then they can easily earn money as well as they satisfy with their jobs. Moreover, they do not face any stress as well as any tension on their mind. They can cope with any stressful situations. For instance, in Singapore mostly individuals are satisfy with their jobs without any stress. Hence, they do not suffer from stress as well as depression which are related to their jobs.
To recapitulate, although salary is play a vital role in everyone's life.Yet, I believe that people only earn money if they have any particular job or occupation because without job as well as work they cannot earn money, through the job they can achieve a amount of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
...money, through the job they can achieve a amount of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, apart from, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77394636015 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64479958446 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.4938541397 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323302251042 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132766228388 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152598827457 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229289331828 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819247727759 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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