Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by some that team spoarts have many advantages, while others consider that it is better to be involved in individual kind of sports. In my opinion, individual sports have more benefits in contrast to teams type of sports.
On the one hand, whike playing in teams, people developsuch skills as comminication and cooperation. For example, in football, a team must gather together and choose a strategy, end everyone must choose a role in this game. It teaches to make decisions in a team and discuss your ideas in a group. In addition, team sports can help find a soulmate, because when you are surrounded by a group of people with same aims and interests, it is easier to become friends.
On the other hand, sports which are played individuallymake more contribute in personal development. Firstly, it allows you to concentrate on your weak points, work on it and improve them. Secondly, you do not depend on others. For instance, in individual sports, people have an opportunity to make their own schedule and do sports whenever it is comfortable for them. You can easily pass a training day, and it will not influence others. Lastly, such kind of sports helps to improve your discipline, because no one reminds you about training and does not tell you what you should do. Your success depend only on you and your work.
In conclusion, it must be said that there are arguments which type of sports are better. I believe, that individual ones give you more than team sports, though everyone must decide for themself what is better personally for them.
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- The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
... choose a role in this game. It teaches to make decisions in a team and discuss your id...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81111111111 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71004077232 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548148148148 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.324165541 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215327855961 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786187147947 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553199871692 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139867119239 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263417534651 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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