Some people argued that technology inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree.
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, people are spending more time in digital platforms. However, people have different view about this topic. Many people believed that due to technology people are less spending time for interact with other people. I completely agree with above statement with reasonable example.
To begin with, children are spending same time for playing game compare with past, but nowadays students are playing electronic games as computer, smartphones and many other devices. For example, a survey done by Times Of India shows that almost 75% students was spending more time in mobile games as PUBG, FREEFIRE and many others in last year. Overall, students are less socially meet their neighbor for doing physical game.
Secondly, elder people are less spending time with their friends and relatives, because of their hectic schedule of working. In some of emergency, people was always help their friends and relatives in past, but nowadays person's friend are in hospital then these person do not spend time to meet these person.
Last but not least, People are always working in digital platforms due to that person do not know neighbor is which types of business/ job doing. As a result, people are less introduce about others as compared to past.
In recapitulation, I surely agree with that people are less interact with other and more spending time in social networking because they thinked that this time we give for our field, which can help to expending their growth.
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Suggestion: in the past
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10756972112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41308002171 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537848605578 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0749993332 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206367456966 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960826756062 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630052361825 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132498049993 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496270557307 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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