Globalisation has revolution our traditional and customs in many part of the world. This eassy will suggest some possible solution so that these rituals should be preserved for future generations.
The primary reason, behind disappearing of traditional values is that families are moving out the countryside. As they are looking better job opportunity. However, busy life of cities responsible for lacking traditional practices. In addition to this, these days, schools plays crucial role for neglecting our culture and tradition because they prefer to western culture on festivals. As a result, in future, it is inevitable that people will be unaware of previous lifestyle practices.
On the other side, it is not too late yet; there are two path through which elderly masses and education institutions can rebuild those lost customs principles. Firstly, schools should contemplate to introduce syllabus on traditional and rituals. Through this learners will be aware their customs and tradition of their country. Secondly, parents can play paramount role too. They should emphasize on spending time with families and attend festivals as well as relatives celebrations occasion in their traditional way. So, these take steps can be bringing tradition and customs back in lives of people.
To conclude, although majority of people migrate for seek better opportunities, the traditional practices have lost its values. Nevertheless, this can regurgitate back in our lifestyle through practices same rituals with family members and introduced it as as subject in school curriculum.
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...s with family members and introduced it as as subject in school curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62083333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95437234827 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9904492178 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257730001017 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889169409762 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693812539278 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151061787352 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403174721391 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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