Advantages and disadvantages of studying online.
There are many advantages of studying online. First of all, it is believed to be a convenient way and not need time to either prepare or take to the class. Online class often takes pupils approximately 5 to 10 minutes to open the laptop or smart phone, and just the double click of mouse, they can join the course without any effort. Whereas, face-to-face class takes people over 15 to 20 min to put their clothes on and prepare stuffs to go to school. As a result, they might find it more convenient and flexible than traditional class. For example, in the morning, with the convenience of learning online, she does not need to wake up early as traditional class and with the double click of mouse, she can take part in the course easily. In addition, learning online is mostly more economical than traditional class. Students could save a large amount of money from studying online since it doesnot require travel cost, and most classes via the Internet are more inexpensive than face to face class. Thus, they could spend that monney to other stuffs that is important. Takes my brother as an example, he signed in a Math online class with approxiamately 600.000 VND for 7 months, which was not as unaffordable as traditional course.
On the other hand, studying online brings us a lot of disadvantages. First, it requires students have to have self-discipline and managing time suitable to themselves. Most pupils have difficulties in planing their own timeable for the online course. Because people studying online find it tough to concentrate on the studing via the Internet, which is interrupted by social media like Facebook, Instagram and they do not have the capable of planing plan to suitable for their daily rountine. As a results, students might be bored by learning online and get stressed-out. Take my friend as an example, she used to be a good student last year, but due to the covid pandemic, she has to study online thourgh Zoom and she feels exhausted as the burden of online learning is more than traditional class. Additionally, it is said to increase the risk of health problems which relevants to eyes, bones and other system in body. Learners have to face to face with the screen of technology devices in a long time, which can affect to student's health as shortsighted, scoliosis. For example, my niece has to study online over 6 hours a day and gradually, she is not only nearsighted but also scoliosis.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s have difficulties in planing their own timeable for the online course. Because ...
^^
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...o suitable for their daily rountine. As a results, students might be bored by learning on...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 937, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to face'.
Suggestion: to face
...and other system in body. Learners have to face to face with the screen of technology devices i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77672209026 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72845011979 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503562945368 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7942401142 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.842105263 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203128874755 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769777388188 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088798085243 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163631459793 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413857427526 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s have difficulties in planing their own timeable for the online course. Because ...
^^
Line 2, column 497, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...o suitable for their daily rountine. As a results, students might be bored by learning on...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 937, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to face'.
Suggestion: to face
...and other system in body. Learners have to face to face with the screen of technology devices i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77672209026 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72845011979 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503562945368 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7942401142 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.842105263 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203128874755 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769777388188 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088798085243 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163631459793 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413857427526 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.