Schooling has long been one of the most important parts of anyone's life. There have been discussions about where or not it's advisable to start school before the recommended age of seven. In my view, age seven seems appropriate for offsprings to embark on their educational path.
On one hand, many believe that starting school before the age of seven has great effects on a child. To explain, psychologists believe that a great part of a child's personality develops untill the age of seven. Therefore, sending children to schools before that can affect their characters and aid them in developing different traits. School and education will provide them with situations that cannot be found in the comfort zone of home. For example, the children sent to school sooner than others will most definitely become more social and outgoing as adults since they engage with more people in their early years.
On the other hand, a large group of parents believe that a child should start learning at the age of seven which has also long been socially accepted. In other words, they believe child's early years must be spent in the shelter of family in order to learn about love and being loved. Morever, as children grow up they will have less quality time to spend with their family members and enjoy their company. Therefore, it is critical that the time before school be passed with parents and loved ones. Surveys suggest that the more a gaurdian takes time to do activities with a child, the happier the child will be.
In my opinion, education is a long path that takes a lot of time and energy and keeps people busy for years. Sending children to schools sooner will only expand this already long journey and might exhaust the young for their later years in life. Early years are important in the upbringing and if it is accompanied by love,support and care of the family it can end up to be joyful years.
To conclude, enrolling children in classes sooner than accepted can be helpful. However, i believe the most helpful thing for anyone is to learn to love and develop deep connections with family members in his or her first years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , support
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76612903226 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37169758108 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502688172043 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3645501796 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25430849045 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849573198894 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719234008009 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140784424932 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687171442249 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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