These days, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, it is common for husbands to become "housewives", while their wives go out finding a job and become the breadwinner of the family. There might have some reasons contributing this to happen, but here are 2 main ones.
First of all, it is noticeable that more families have wives wearing pants in the relationship. They tend to make decisions about every single thing in the house, and hold the biggest responsibilities. If they feel like getting into the business roles instead of cooking and cleaning the house all day, nobody can stop them from doing so. As for the second reason, men in these days can both manage their child and perform household chores perfectly, therefore whoever stay at home and take care of those daily housework just doesn't matter anymore.
In my point of view, I believe that this change has brought something on the table. The mothers of this generation are confident about themselves since they have their own rights, and husbands can do everything without any hesitation since they love their partners. The development has surely broken a whole load of stereotypes about partner's roles and equality in a relationship, which can be a positive sign for a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...take care of those daily housework just doesnt matter anymore. In my point of view,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, as for, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92025236832 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710784313725 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7614687526 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25014691925 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771923860893 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598283689496 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145352017802 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143224205563 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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