In most families nowadays, a new concept is developing rapidly in which youngsters stay at home with their father, although a mother has traditionally been looking after their offspring in many countries.
There are the salary and the care for their children, which are reasons behind this phenomenon and I believe this brings more good than harm to people.
The major explanation why a man is staying at home is that he failed to reach a higher position or level in his job. As a result, more and more high-paid occupations are taken by women, and if a wife’s wage is significantly greater than a husband's, it is reasonable for males to remain at home and raise their children. For example, Hillary Clinton was running as a female presidential candidate for a major political party in the U.S, which was one of the first women elected for this position. In addition, with the changes in social beliefs, many fathers take care of their children or cook and play with them better than their wives. For instance, according to the research from Countryliving newpaper, the more time fathers spend with their children, from the moment they are born, the better.
In my personal perspective, a father’s commitment to the family is also as important as the mother’s, which can be a significant advantage. First and foremost, males have the obligation and flexibility to raise their offspring and care for their families. Subsequently, several benefits can be seen in this when dads can not only assist their wives with housekeeping but also get along with their youngsters and deal with issues that are too difficult for women to handle. Furthermore, as the most comfortable and natural method to help young people become more confident in social skills, masculinity allows greater independence for cognitive education and fosters kids’ potential. In Vietnam, for instance, mothers urge their sons to attend academic lessons while fathers encourage them to join a sports club or a judo class.
To summarize, while historically a woman is a person who takes care of the children, in this modern world, there is a new trend when a child is staying home with its father. That is an explanation why I think stay-home-daddy is a positive result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9920212766 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84354035724 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558510638298 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.250998213 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.071428571 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362490986989 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128740220093 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481517662824 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214233992622 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349293580342 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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