People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?
Living abroad or having a new job, where people often have to face with various unfamiliar situations, might put them under great pressure. A recent research said that above 80% of the immigrants feel unease whenever they settle in a new country. This is because it requires a long period to adapt with new environment, new culture and new language. However, there are several measures, which will be discussed in this essay, could alleviate the situation.
Lack of connection is the main reason why people feel it difficult. Since families and friends are not beside as always, it would not be easy to express oneself thought and feeling. For example, after graduate from high school, leaving hometown or country is often the choice of many student to continue their academic study. As a result, this might lead to depression if the process of adapting is not taking place fast enough.
In order to overcome these problems, first of all, study about the new culture beforehand is a good method. For instance, immigrants might blend in faster if they could speak host country language at a certain basic level. This is the same cases with new jobs, knowing what colleagues are interesting in might give insights to mitigate with the workplaces better. In addition, keeping contact with old friends or family would provide great mental support while people are struggling with new environment. In order words, people should sending mails, video calls or texting with friends they already made while creating new relationships at work or school. Furthermore, joining local community activities or school clubs, where people usually have a lot in common with, is also a great idea.
In conclusion, it is obvious that adapting with a new life is not easy to everyone, however, if people well prepared and supported, it would be less difficult to slowly getting familiar with those new situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'many students'.
Suggestion: many students
...etown or country is often the choice of many student to continue their academic study. As a ...
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Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...h new jobs, knowing what colleagues are interesting in might give insights to mitigate with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05732484076 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56500540117 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5995780563 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.866666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175224193309 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600684195419 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433612789335 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115453451508 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251576450085 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.