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Recently, there has been a surge in the number of juvenile delinquents worldwide. Look at this matter in depth, it can be attributed by multiple reasons and young offenders should be punished according to their crimes’ severity but not in jail
Regarding the roots, this phenomenon is derived primarily from the lack of time spent by parents with children, leading to their shortages of knowledge and awareness. It is true that in this hectic world, many parents are too occupied with their jobs that barely can they spend sufficient time with their children to monitor and educate them properly. In addition, with the prevalence of violence on almost every kind of platfroms from video games to social media nowadays, children and teenagers are more easily enticed to go off the track
When it comes to young people’s punishments, it should be strong but not too harsh like sentencing them in prisons. In fact, it is scientifically proved that many parts of young adolescents’ brains are not fully developed yet, therefore, they may commit crimes by accident and prison may not act as a deterence for them. Instead, the government can send them back to their families with stricter supervision or to some special institutions where people can point out their flaws and prevent them from repeating the same mistake. Consequently, as being given a second chance to turn over a new leaf, high chance that young people will behave better in the future
To conclude, it is a pressing issue when the number of juvenile delinquents is witnessed with an upward trend. This can be contributed by the insufficient care from their parents that leading them to be unwary of wrongdoings and as they are not fully grown-up we should not put them into jail as a punishment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93959731544 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72062193321 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4360709523 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.0 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.25 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.065989036585 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301417456549 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525915619047 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061264305516 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617327289734 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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