Some people say that sports play an important role in society. others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary life, people think that playing sports is a significant part of society, while others claim that it is just for a recreational purpose. However, I personally believe that sports bring more greater benefits than a leisure activity.
On the one hand,sports are considered as a leisure activity. This is because not many people have abilities to play professionally, so they particularly play simple activities for enjoyment. For instance, walking, running or doing yoga are the choice for people to enhance health. Moreover, many people are busy in working so they only take part in sporting activities when they have time to spare. sporting is not compulsory, therefore, everyone plays for fun at their free time. A typical example is that students play basketball or football at school during breaks.
In spite of the above arguements, I support the view that sports play a vital role in our lives. The primany benefit is that playing sports often help people have a beautiful body or avoid many diseases. The fact that doing exercise that it can support everyone who are obesity burning calories and losing weight. Additionally, sporting activities are indeed for most children to improve their appearance such as playing basketball can improve their height and help them more taller. Secondly, sporting activities expand children's relationships and interaction with peers. Instead of playing phones or watching TV at leisure time, it is more helpful for students to play sports to enhance their stamina, agility and immune system. Also,parents can use sports for trainning their children in physical and mental health.
All in all, it is my strong conviction that sports bring us a number of substantial benefits more than a pastime, among which is increasing in strength and spirits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
... I personally believe that sports bring more greater benefits than a leisure activity. On...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sports
...n a leisure activity. On the one hand,sports are considered as a leisure activity. T...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sporting
...ctivities when they have time to spare. sporting is not compulsory, therefore, everyone ...
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Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...g exercise that it can support everyone who are obesity burning calories and losing wei...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'taller' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: taller
... can improve their height and help them more taller. Secondly, sporting activities expand c...
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Line 5, column 736, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , parents
...stamina, agility and immune system. Also,parents can use sports for trainning their chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24827586207 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80614240483 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0682865149 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234001415987 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083354921586 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431655064842 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147992511297 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504504676814 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.