The bargraph shows the household owning and renting accommodation in England and Wales in between 1918 to 2011. X axis shows the different years From 1918 to 2011. Y axis shows the percentage of household accommodation. In 1918, mostly people live on rent while few person have their own house.
In the first year, 1998 household in rented accommodation was 78 percentage which was higher thqn the other years as well as owned accommodation while 23 percentage. People have their own house. 1939 and 1953 percentage of owned and rented which was 32 percentage and 69 percentage in both year percentage were equal. In 1971, it was noticeable that percentage of both accommodation was average 50 percentage. After 1971 convenience of household owning was increased while rented persons ratio was decreased. Convenience of house owners wele level off in 1991 to 2001 which was 79 percentage. In the same year rented persons ratio was 32 percentage. In 2011, it was fall by 75 percentage in owned household while it was risen by 38 percentage in rented household.
In a nutshell, it is crystal clear that before 1971 mostly people live as a rented person. In 1971 percentage of rented and owned both were same. After 1971 convenience of owned household were increased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'few people', 'few persons'.
Suggestion: few people; few persons
... 1918, mostly people live on rent while few person have their own house. In the first y...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ccommodation was average 50 percentage. After 1971 convenience of household owning wa...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y 38 percentage in rented household. In a nutshell, it is crystal clear that be...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... mostly people live as a rented person. In 1971 percentage of rented and owned bot...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...age of rented and owned both were same. After 1971 convenience of owned household wer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99528301887 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87360952801 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462264150943 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0846006284 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269157865909 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126546963986 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110268214861 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2205410645 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110115764393 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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