In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In many nations, citizens are unable to buy a house for their own, and instead, they have to rent rooms and houses from other people. For many families, having a house of their ownership is of paramount importance since it would be more convenient . In my opnion, this is a positive tendency and this essay will present my reasons.
To commence with, owning a house is important for its convenience to the dwellers. This is because they would have a place to stay in a long term of time, instead of moving from one to another accommodation. As people tend to purchase a lot of items during their daily life, it would take them a considerable amount of time to pack their properties to move to different houses. Additionally, since it is their own house, they could do any repairs or design it how they want, which can hardly be done when renting others' house. As a result, the residents would have a more enjoyable life, enhancing not only their mental health but also their relationship with their neighbours.
This is a positive tendency for two reasons. The first reason is that it would improve the living standards of the citizens since they would have more money to spend on other needs. For example, instead of paying for the rent every month, they could use that money to buy commodities for their family or pay for medicine when they are ill. The second reason is this might mitigate the stress from monetary burdens. This is because people would no longer have to pay for transfering their properties and the bills for ech month would be reduced. As a results, the moral rate would decrease, which benefit the society.
In conclusion, this tendency is important for its convenient and it is a positive situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70627062706 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54073462014 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521452145215 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0012345467 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20834243481 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898763466742 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063694252187 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159851609502 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341736077049 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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