Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations.
However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer
nations in such areas.
Many underdeveloped countries nowadays face serious problems trying to provide their
citizens with decent education and health facilities, as well as in other areas like trade.
However, I disagree that developed nations ought to support these countries, and think
they should try to stand on their own feet instead.
It is usually possible for poor countries to raise enough money to overcome their
predicaments since the source of their shortcomings is usually deep corruption and
domestic mismanagement, which have resulted in their funds being embezzled by
dishonest officials and their affairs in areas like education, health and trade run by
unqualified authorities. If they are in need of support in such areas, they should first
make an effort to eradicate the abovementioned issues before asking for aid from the
outside world.
Furthermore, the money that the governments of developed countries have belongs to
their citizens because it originates from their taxes, customs duties, and national
resources. It should therefore be spent on providing better facilities like health centres and
universities, and improving business environments for their own citizens, not for people
living elsewhere in the world.
Some may argue that the decline in living conditions in developing countries could result
in the migration of their citizens to developed countries in search of a better life, which
involves serious financial and cultural concerns for rich nations. However, public
investment in improving border control and defense structures can render these concerns
insignificant.
In conclusion, I think developed countries should not aid poor countries, as their funds
should be invested in the betterment of life for their own citizens. Undeveloped nations
can often overcome their shortcomings in commerce, health and education on their own
through eliminating corrupt officials and improving their management practices.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84137931034 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95490482835 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9972307102 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.4 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203792790722 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919045979821 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324021537115 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607613012055 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490897722493 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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