people in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with illegal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a poor sample. discusses the causes and some of the effects of the widespread use of drugs by young people in modern society.
Drugs are a common consumption material in modern society in all circles, but young people often experiment with these prohibited items. Besides that, some sociologists say that as a society, they often set a bad example.
This happens, firstly because in modern society there has been a change in the activity of increasing working hours so that drugs are needed as long-lasting drugs even though they have a bad impact on health, both cultural and religious values which have been eroded by the modernization of time so that they do not pay attention to applicable norms. The three environmental influences, the majority of which are in the circle of drug users, making it difficult to resist. However, for young people who are in the phase of searching for identity and drugs are one of their experimenting tools because of their inner feelings. On the other hand due to the lack of supervision from parents so that they are in an unreachable environment, one of which is the circulation of prohibited goods. This is a weakness in youth and i have seen this in my environment..
Even so, there are appropriate steps in dealing with drugs in modern society, firstly making government regulations in partnership with community groups as well as annual evaluations in order to overcome various leaks in policy. Secondly, education on the dangers of drugs to every element of modern society and especially to companies that have more workloads than others. However, especially for young people, firstly there is education provided by the government to families about the dangers of drugs and how to supervise young people in the world of association. Secondly, character education at a young age by diverting curiosity into activities that have an individual impact. The three stages of rehabilitation for those who have been touched by drugs and provide mental motivational support to change for a better world. Even so, the perception of everyone and the surrounding environment will still be born, whether it is bad or good, because drugs are goods that can infiltrate and have an impact on every individual's life.
In conclusion, the degradation of norms, religious values and more workloads as well as weak supervision is one of the causes of modern society and young people using drugs and being followed by the surrounding environment of prohibited items.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alth, both cultural and religious values which have been eroded by the modernizat...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...h and i have seen this in my environment.. Even so, there are appropriate steps...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... infiltrate and have an impact on every individuals life. In conclusion, the degradation...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e degradation of norms, religious values and more workloads as well as weak super...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...llowed by the surrounding environment of prohibited items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, even so, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13110539846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93436369291 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501285347044 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7542575001 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.571428571 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7857142857 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263344273133 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931191113068 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592907434137 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183919122937 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567883083717 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Drugs
Drugs
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alth, both cultural and religious values which have been eroded by the modernizat...
^^^
Line 3, column 862, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...h and i have seen this in my environment.. Even so, there are appropriate steps...
^^
Line 5, column 1022, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... infiltrate and have an impact on every individuals life. In conclusion, the degradation...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e degradation of norms, religious values and more workloads as well as weak super...
^^^
Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llowed by the surrounding environment of prohibited items.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, even so, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13110539846 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93436369291 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501285347044 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7542575001 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.571428571 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7857142857 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263344273133 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931191113068 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592907434137 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183919122937 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567883083717 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.