Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Overpopulation is being one of the most concerning trends in the world nowadays because of the negative impact that it brings. However, overpopulation is normally considered to cause adverse effects on the economy and medicine, though, it can also affect the environment badly. Therefore, I firmly agree with the given idea.
First of all, overpopulation is one of the main causes of environmental pollution. The growth in the numbers of citizens means that more land is needed in order to provide accommodation and public necessities such as schools, supermarkets or amenities,...The action of land exploitation results in landslides and it also leads to flooding in the areas that are placed at a low position. Additionally, the waste being thrown each year is predicted to be increased among with the amount of smoke and oil from factories. For instance, in 2021 the population decreased a little bit due to the consequences of COVID-19 disease; however, the rare positive side is that some of the creatures out there in the wild had been conserved as a result of the long period of abandonment of some factories.
The second point I should mention is about some solutions that have been discussed to deal with this issue. The first solution is based on the official head, who had the responsibility to restrict and reinforce the laws of giving birth to children. For example, a family should raise 1-2 children only and some families who have got problems with reproduction should be encouraged to adopt kids from the orphan so as to decrease the number of babies. Furthermore, the dwellers should also take their responsibility to follow the rules strictly and raise their own awareness not only in giving birth to children but also in the environment.
To sum up, the overpopulation trend is being overlooked for the negative effect that it brings. Hence, not only the government but also the citizens have to raise awareness and take action in preserving the environment and limiting the number of babies being given birth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, look, second, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05934718101 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0093292997 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1799883815 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.153846154 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115121737994 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471306478949 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441608443178 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717916022863 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496321455904 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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