The graph shows the life expectancy of people living in Asian regions from 1950 predicts life expectancy until 2300. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares and projects the average age of citizen in different regions of Asia from the year 1950 to 2300.
Overall, the life expectancy in the past are extremely low in most areas, however it is forecast that by the end of the period these numbers will improved. In addition, the figures undergo fluctuations with upward trend in the first one hundred years then become soon become stable.
The average life time of Asian people has increased sharply between 1950 and 2000. To be precise, many regions, starting from 40 years old, has raised to about 60 to 70 years old, except for the “other Eastern Asia” demographic, where the figure began with above 50 years old and ended up with almost 80 years old in average. People in this region have the highest average age in general.
In the next 50 years, the growth of all groups are projected to slow down. Whilst individuals in China, South-east Asia and Western Asia are predicted to live up to 78 years old, India and Other South-central Asia region are slightly lower with about 73 years old. the prediction is that the other easterner Asia region will still higher than other region 10 years in term of life expectancy. It is noticeable that three hundred years from now, Asian people will likely to survive much longer in their old age. In order words, most part of Asia will have life expectancy about 90 years, in which the other easterner Asia group will be surprisingly over 100 years, followed by China with about 95 years old.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...he end of the period these numbers will improved. In addition, the figures undergo fluct...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...come soon become stable. The average life time of Asian people has increased sharply b...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...slightly lower with about 73 years old. the prediction is that the other easterner ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, then, except for, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73106060606 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31073956395 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9057947789 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.545454545 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1581241073 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762823196976 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554021098343 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109616045561 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288485670674 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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