It is sometimes argued that in most countries the conventional food cuisine has been changed by foreign fast foods which had pessimistic consequences on families and communities. I agree with this notion because of fast pace leads to less time for families and contemporary lifestyle led by people.
The main reason why I believe that families are being compromised is that families have less time to be with each other This is due to family members being busier at work and with their social lives. Consequently, people don't have time to prepare healthy food at home instead, they rely on readily available junk foods and they can move on to another chore. In addition to this kind of unhealthy food items reduced the family tie-up which had before. To illustrate, In India previous decades people find time to gather themselves on marriage occasions to prepare food on the previous day which enhanced people to chit chat and build up their relations, which all these have been replaced by this modern trend.
Another reason why I support the notion that society is being impacted negatively is that this high rich calorie food leads people to diseases like diabetics, high cholesterol and associated risks that may cause death. Child obesity is also soaring in the contemporary era This under nutritious diet carefully affects upcoming generations which becomes immunity individuals. This leads to harmful effects on fast food in our society.
In conclusion, I completely agree that rapid pace and contemporary lifestyles are having negative consequences on family and social life replacing traditional food habits with foreign junk foods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...heir social lives. Consequently, people dont have time to prepare healthy food at ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19172932331 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69226745156 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1812032052 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381276240773 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156758420544 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593940938188 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233093741043 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125694928861 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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