Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular speicies of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems.
Discuss those views and give your own opinions
In recent years, it is widely acknowledged that the deterioration of environmental quality raises a valid concern to the masses. Some people say that the primary environmental issue of our time is a few particular species of plants and animals gradually disappearing. Others argue that humans have more prominent environmental troubles. As far as I am concerned, the environment is devastated by many causes. In this essay, I will list some rationales and my outlook.
On the one hand, a host of animals are on the brink of extinction, which is one of the main problems. First and foremost, the loss of many species of fungi, flora, wild animals, and so on takes a heavy toll on the diversity of the bio-ecosystem. Besides that, I cannot deny the inextricable relationship between humans and animals, which is key to people’s life. If plants and animals disappear one day, the worst scenario will happen that is the solely lacking of food and among others. For instance, the death of the last rhino Java in Vietnam was a topic of interest and spelled trouble for Vietnamese ecological balance.
On the other hand, there are other critical environmental concerns. Admittedly, air pollution, water pollution, energy crisis, and the like are pressing issues and have an adverse bearing on the balance of the ecosystem. Moreover, nationals also do the environment a disservice. To be more specific, citizens abuse carbon-intensive energy sources such as gas, coal, and among others and put their heads in the sand when talking about environmental degradation. Effectively, it leads to a throw-away society, which does more harm than good to our balanced ecosystem.
To sum up, both given schools of thought are legitimate. I suggest that individuals should face a problem head-on before it is too late, and also citizens and governments should grapple with this difficulty such as implementing greener substitutes by using hybrid vehicles or utilizing biodegradable products. Therefore, we could push for a greener future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, talking about, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18654434251 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10194266147 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5444492347 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218409084428 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553261282688 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716310196697 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111803012211 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850347339906 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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