You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
give details of what went wrong
explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time
say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Mr. Jones,
Last weekend, I have stayed in your hotel due to no transportation services running on road due to the heavy storm and raining in Toronto. I booked a small room for only one night as next morning I had to travelled back to Vancouver. However, I received a poor hospitality services from your hotel.
Let me explain in your brief what had happened during my stay at your hotel. Firstly, the heating system was not working in your hotel which made my room cold. I got sick next morning due to non-functional facility of heating system. Secondly, in the midnight, I ordered a hot chocolate coffee and cookies, but I received it in the morning. This kind of hospitality I had never seen in my life.
Due to the order I received in the morning, I had to took a sleeping pill medicine because of the shivering in my body due to the cold weather outside. Eventually, I got ill and had to stay on sick leaves during my work days.
Therefore, I would like you to suggest to improve your hotel services by changing your air-cons in the rooms and provide some good training to your hotel staff. I hope you will share a response to my feedback through this letter and refund my money which I paid to enjoy your hospitality.
I am looking forward to hearing from your soon.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest improving'.
Suggestion: suggest improving
...days. Therefore, I would like you to suggest to improve your hotel services by changing your ai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.589958159 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60306200347 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2132072933 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3571428571 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220586927426 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752037004153 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695164270591 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112286841495 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707962141674 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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