You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping center has cheap second hand furniture Write to the shop owner 1 Describe what you need2 Ask whether they have these items3 What items cost You

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the availability of some furniture which I wish to purchase. I rented an unfurnished flat recently and my friend strongly recommended your store to me for purchasing reasonable second-hand furniture.

Regarding my intention to purchase furniture, I would like a king-size bed, closet and wooden dressing table in my bedroom. I also need a computer desktop attached with a cabinet and bookcase in my workspace. Meanwhile, a couple of sofa chairs and a coffee table will be placed in the living room. As all as a kitchen table and 4 chairs are required in the kitchen. In addition, I would like a microwave oven, TV set and rice cooker in advance.

The furniture must be in good condition and the electronic goods must be in banded products with at least six months valid warranty remaining. I would appreciate it if you could inform me of the availability of those items along with their price and detail.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, second, so, while, at least, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88333333333 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84385302011 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677777777778 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3477237911 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107109924426 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364123669947 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507489667155 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792837333095 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508220300349 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.