The world population is increasing day by day, overpopulation brings a lot of problems to every country, even poor countries or developing nations. Not only nations’ development, but also the global economy will be affected by overpopulation.
First of all, the most common problem of overpopulation is that the food supply will increase. There is no denying that food is a necessity for daily life in poverty and wealthy countries. Insufficient food remains in poverty countries, the number of deaths will rise even more as the population continues to grow. The death of infants and children who can work in the future will rise, and the country’s sustainable development has a tremendous effect in the future.
Meanwhile, industrialized countries need to spend more money on the purchase of food. When the population rises, other countries may reduce their food output, hence it is difficult for some developing countries to purchase. As a result, they require fields to produce food and reduce the land occupied by existing technology. It will also slow down the country’s development.
Secondly, the global economy become unbalanced. Global food demand raises as the global population grows. However, the food supply-demand mismatch causes the price of food to increase. Thus, the proportion of expenditures spent on food increased than had to be cut in other conveniences, such as education, medical, etc.
From an economic point of view, the government can set a price limit to reduce the price of food to let residents easy to buy food. Furthermore, the government need to educate resident to make a birth plan. The policy may help to remain a reasonable population as well as every family can afford the expenditure and the death of population will be decreased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06184445932 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.528359539 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190840557096 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598258701192 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591424332143 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113194967187 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777313344074 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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