Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?
Some people think that in this day and age, the amount of violence in the media is growing. They will affect other people while using. Others deny these idea, they think that social media will not do harm for people. I completely agree that watching television or playing computer will not influence bad to person.
First of all, if someone intends to do harm , that is not because watching tv or playing video games but due to people’s behaviour , relates to personality and their education. Intelligent people have enough knowledge to know what they are watching is just a fictional film. For instance, the majority reality shows have content about battle or how to protect from thief and burglar. Much of this involved violence scene but it does have a damaging effecft on society. Due to these shows, countless people learn usefull skills and they can apply in practice
Finally, playing games or watching something are way to relieve our anger. A large part of fighting game have been released recently for people who want to reduce strees and also provide some benefits such as battle with other people, for those who is a big fan of violence game. Moreover, social media is a place where man relieve stress, mental support after hard working day.
For the above arguments, I believe that social media has no influence on how people behave. Television and computer are not the main factors that shape personal character and they can even be useful tools reducing stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87301587302 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33336728554 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626984126984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0548020125 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311077396308 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102359183395 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437721725125 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177891704178 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329063100526 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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