Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports play a vital role in an individuals life as it can help in creating a career or it could act as a source of entertainment. Some people opine that it is beneficial to play a team sport rather than individual sport while others have the opposite mindset.
Overall, it is evident that sports have proven beneficial since ages for humans irrespective of being individual or group sport as each type has its own pros and cons. Individual sport can help a person harness abilities like becoming independent and not rely on other individuals. Moreover, it develops a stable mind and keeps us determined on ourselves and our goals instead of focusing on a team and preparing everyone for the same. For example, lawn tennis is an individual sport where a person has has to concentrate on improving his own skills and suppose if he/she losses a match they can criticize themselves for not performing and not someone else. But, an individual sport might make a person egoistic because of the self-development.
On the contrary, even group sports has proven noteworthy for development of interpersonal skills of players though it has certain drawbacks. Playing in a group helps an individual learn the importance of team work necessary for efficient performance in games as well as in real life. It helps nourishing individuals mutual respect for each other and increases bonding which can relatively improvise teams performance. Such sports can prove beneficial especially for children to evolve into excellent professionals in future as they will be able to communicate well and would handle the team efficiently. But, dependency becomes an important factor and excess of it can lead to downfall of both individual and team.
In conclusion, sports are not just merely a fun to play and watch but it helps productively in nurturing certain moral values essential for our survival. However, team sports offer a slight advantage over individual sport because the nourishment it gives to an individual.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
Sports play a vital role in an individuals life as it can help in creating a caree...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: has
...s is an individual sport where a person has has to concentrate on improving his own ski...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... concentrate on improving his own skills and suppose if he/she losses a match the...
^^
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to nourish' or 'nourish'.
Suggestion: to nourish; nourish
...games as well as in real life. It helps nourishing individuals mutual respect for each oth...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00157200287 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8540371203 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242146294769 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993795481704 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061979098705 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173410061132 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401597337519 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
Sports play a vital role in an individuals life as it can help in creating a caree...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: has
...s is an individual sport where a person has has to concentrate on improving his own ski...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... concentrate on improving his own skills and suppose if he/she losses a match the...
^^
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to nourish' or 'nourish'.
Suggestion: to nourish; nourish
...games as well as in real life. It helps nourishing individuals mutual respect for each oth...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00157200287 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8540371203 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242146294769 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993795481704 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061979098705 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173410061132 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401597337519 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.