Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time.
Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans.
Which do you prefer-planning or not planning for your leisure time?
Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice. Write your opinion in an appropriate style and format in 250 words on your answer sheet.
Making plans for free time activities is considered as not essential by most people whereas some agree to plan what they do in their spare time. There are both advantages and drawbacks of doing so, as far as I am concerned, such as spending the free time properly with the help of plans and wasting extra time for thinking about what to do before.
On the one hand, people are making schedule for their whole day, not only for their working time but also for free time activities. They want to spend their free time well by planning, so that they can do everything in their list and enjoy the time. Company staff, for instance, have no enough time to be with their family members or to do hobbies on weekdays, thus they have a lot to do at weekends. If they do not organize the activities they want to do at that time, it is easy for them to lose their concentration on the activities or they can not manage the free time to divide properly for each activity. As I am agree with them, planning helps much to amuse at the time without any problems.
On the other hand, the preferable sides of not planning for leisure time is also common amongst most. The kind of people believe in themselves that they can spend their free time without planning as they assume it is just wasting time to plan. It is a fact that making plans requires much time to think about the proper activities possible to do at the time. For this reason, they begin to have a rest simply instead making choices for planning. However, the people become challenged, from my point of view, in their free time without any exact purpose. They can not control the time for the activities.
To conclude, although there are some disadvantages of making plans for people's free time, its privileges prevail over them. It would be useful for workers, if there is an accurate schedule to write lists of activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ide properly for each activity. As I am agree with them, planning helps much to amuse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51906158358 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35871211586 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469208211144 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8471405228 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.561733692208 0.244688304435 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242482122551 0.084324248473 288% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113251054069 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.413578792863 0.151304729494 273% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890655164182 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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