Many people prefer to spend money and not save it.
What are the reasons?
Is this a positive or negative development?
In this modern world, spending money instead saving it, is considered to be more preferable for many. This is caused by increasing needs of people as well as their charrecter that they want to show off their money.
Most people spend their all income without leaving spare money, because they try to cover their necessities as a whole. As the world is becoming modern, requirements to live and their costs change, it makes people need to buy more and more products. Modern electronic equipments, for instance, are such products which people want to use them at home, like washing machine. In addition, some people have a desire to look rich in the eyes of others. They are ready to spend a huge amount of money for ridiculously expensive products or services which they do not need, in order to brag. For example, Mercedes-Benz cars are mostly in the same quality with Chevrolet cars, but the former is far more expensive and has a higher status, so they are bought for the purpose.
There is a risk of bankruptcy that require saved money for people. If people spend without accumulating some finance for the period, they may face such difficulties which even can lead them to detrimental illnesses. In this case, the people can not manage their life-balance without money. Moreover, they may have financial problems in their old ages after retirement from work. If the people do not have some money to support them when they become 65+, the life at this time seems frightening for them, because they can not earn enough after they are 65 years old. Thus, it is incorrect not to save money.
To conclude, spending all money may seem attractive, but the possibility of failure should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81972789116 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53051395098 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5953981613 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208831897961 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914508871419 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644307361764 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153074845556 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645643293559 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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