Nowadays people are able to use the internet to do an increasing number of tasks Is this a positive or negative development

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...ople to do a range of their daily tasks.From my point of view, the advantages of usi...
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...f view, the advantages of using internet , such as, acquiring new skills as well ...
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...il over its insignificant disadvantages . On the one hand,the Internet can offer...
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...ificant disadvantages . On the one hand,the Internet can offer opportunities to peo...
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...ternet can offer opportunities to people not only in education ,but also in their...
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...unities to people not only in education ,but also in their social life.First, you...
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...ducation ,but also in their social life.First, young generations are capable of learn...
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...day via different websites. For instance ,there are a plenty of video lessons, wh...
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...ferent websites. For instance ,there are a plenty of video lessons, which are pre...
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...which are prepared by experienced tutors ,for particularly language learners .Apa...
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...their lessons interesting and productive .Second, nowadays people can keep in touc...
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...eir lessons interesting and productive .Second, nowadays people can keep in touch with...
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...in touch with their relatives or friends in spite of their destinations.For thi...
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... their relatives or friends in spite of their destinations.For this, they may u...
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...iends in spite of their destinations.For this, they may use many social network...
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...eir destinations.For this, they may use many social networks ,like instagram ,t...
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...this, they may use many social networks ,like instagram ,telegram or whatsapp in...
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...messages in numerous parts of the world.In addition,it helps avoid homesick and i...
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...mal demerits, it is extremely beneficial to use the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65703971119 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24662541053 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70036101083 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.645714732 49.4020404114 445% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 313.4 106.682146367 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.4 20.7667163134 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.4 7.06120827912 487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128606802752 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775592178164 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342438029101 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877832304236 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335164377304 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.9 13.0946893788 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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