Nowadays people are able to use the internet to do an increasing number of tasks.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Currently , the internet enables people to do a range of their daily tasks.From my point of view, the advantages of using internet , such as, acquiring new skills as well as communicating with acquaintances easily, prevail over its insignificant disadvantages .
On the one hand,the Internet can offer opportunities to people not only in education ,but also in their social life.First, young generations are capable of learning new subjects without any charges today via different websites. For instance ,there are a plenty of video lessons, which are prepared by experienced tutors ,for particularly language learners .Apart from that, even teachers can find various teaching methods for the sake of making their lessons interesting and productive .Second, nowadays people can keep in touch with their relatives or friends in spite of their destinations.For this, they may use many social networks ,like instagram ,telegram or whatsapp in order to contact with them via video messages in numerous parts of the world.In addition,it helps avoid homesick and isolation between them .
On the other hand , there can be obstacles in terms of reliablity of websites and redundancy of advertisements in the middle of videos or information.Unlike other mass media ,on the internet information might be collected by different people rather than professionals .Thus , sometimes people may have challenges regarding distinguishing wrong and right sources , it may lead to confusion in their mind .Another drawback of it , individuals might be irritated by watching far more advertisements while searching valuable data.For example, when students are reading quite important articles,they would be angry ,if they encountered unnecessary footages of them.
By way of conclusion , despite the minimal demerits, it is extremely beneficial to use the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65703971119 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24662541053 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70036101083 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.645714732 49.4020404114 445% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 313.4 106.682146367 294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.4 20.7667163134 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.4 7.06120827912 487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128606802752 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775592178164 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342438029101 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877832304236 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335164377304 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.9 13.0946893788 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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